New concept Englsh 2 ,第19课 摘要写作.求英语前辈们点评一下.The play was going to begin at any moment.I asked for two tickets.There were not any left.Susan and me were disappointed.A man hurried to the ticket-office just then.He return
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![New concept Englsh 2 ,第19课 摘要写作.求英语前辈们点评一下.The play was going to begin at any moment.I asked for two tickets.There were not any left.Susan and me were disappointed.A man hurried to the ticket-office just then.He return](/uploads/image/z/14069489-41-9.jpg?t=New+concept+Englsh+2+%2C%E7%AC%AC19%E8%AF%BE+%E6%91%98%E8%A6%81%E5%86%99%E4%BD%9C.%E6%B1%82%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E5%89%8D%E8%BE%88%E4%BB%AC%E7%82%B9%E8%AF%84%E4%B8%80%E4%B8%8B.The+play+was+going+to+begin+at+any+moment.I+asked+for+two+tickets.There+were+not+any+left.Susan+and+me+were+disappointed.A+man+hurried+to+the+ticket-office+just+then.He+return)
New concept Englsh 2 ,第19课 摘要写作.求英语前辈们点评一下.The play was going to begin at any moment.I asked for two tickets.There were not any left.Susan and me were disappointed.A man hurried to the ticket-office just then.He return
New concept Englsh 2 ,第19课 摘要写作.求英语前辈们点评一下.
The play was going to begin at any moment.I asked for two tickets.There were not any left.Susan and me were disappointed.A man hurried to the ticket-office just then.He returned two tickets.They were for next Wednesday’s performance.I bought them.
New concept Englsh 2 ,第19课 摘要写作.求英语前辈们点评一下.The play was going to begin at any moment.I asked for two tickets.There were not any left.Susan and me were disappointed.A man hurried to the ticket-office just then.He return
1,别总是用一种句式,尤其全部都是简单句.
2,尝试着用一些从句或多一些表情感的词语类,可以让句子更丰富更富有情感.
3,句子之间试着用一些连词衔接,这样上下句子意思会更连贯
第三句有点小错误:But there isn't any ticket left.如果是我,我可能会直接说:There's nothing left.这样更简洁些.
第四句有点小错误,改为:Susan and I.
你再试着按照我说的,修改下看看效果.